The Tree
The tree swayed and trembled as
the brutal winds tried to push and pull it off the Earth. The tree struggled to stay standing as the
storm wreaked havoc through the city.
The storm vanished just as quickly as it had appeared. Everything went quiet and not a thing moved. The tree had survived the storm, or so it
thought. Its branches were pulled apart,
roots almost ripped and leaves were falling off. The tree was decaying. It knew its time has come to an end. Suddenly, fingers emerged from the
ground. The hand took the tree down into
the Earth.
The only thing that I could find was changing, The storm vanished just as quick as it appeared. To, The storm vanished just as quickly as it had appeared.
ReplyDeleteThe tree was decaying. It knew its time has come to an end. Maybe combine these two sentences with the word 'and'.