Laughter
There are many things that make people laugh. It can be a joke like:
My friend thinks he is smart. He
told me an onion is the only food that makes you cry, so I threw a coconut at
his face.
Did I get you on that joke? No? How about this one:
I
was listening to some loud music. I
was about to turn it off until my neighbor threw a brick into my window so he
could hear it better.
Did you laugh on that one? Laughter is a sign of joy. Everyone laughs
once in a while.
You can't use ' in here's because there are no " "
ReplyDeleteOk
DeleteI was about to turn it off,
ReplyDeleteI think you should use a comma after off.
I'm to sure if that's correct, thanks for the feedback though.
Deletethis is an awesome story(:
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteNice story, it really made me laugh especially the part where you wrote about throwing the coconut. I just think you should take away the coma after the word "off" overall very funny and nice story.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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